This is an interesting outline. However, try to steer clear of the comparing and contrasting of topics, (like the alochol to marijuana). Also, how would this look in a topical/formal outline as opposed to a web outline, which was more of the requirement here? Your thesis is also much more related to an introduction and not a clear, set statement that is focused. This is something to consider, as well.
This is an interesting outline. However, try to steer clear of the comparing and contrasting of topics, (like the alochol to marijuana). Also, how would this look in a topical/formal outline as opposed to a web outline, which was more of the requirement here? Your thesis is also much more related to an introduction and not a clear, set statement that is focused. This is something to consider, as well.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job on your outline. I like how you included your conclusion.
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