The purpose of my paper is to show the difference between pow wow , and Coastal Native American culture. I decided that these would be great topics because I know a lot about the topics and I would be able to write about them because I come from both cultures. I also know that they share similarities, which would also be fairly simple to write about. I am very excited to start my paper!
You know, this is a great topic and I've always been curious about it. It means that much more that you're writing about it seeing that you have the personal expertise on the subject instead of someone who studies it without the experience to back it up. Very informative.
ReplyDeleteOh wow! I really like your topic as well as your diagram. I didn't go into that much detail with mine and think that I should have. Whoops :( I look forward to reading your paper.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading your prior post (picture) I got a real sense of tribal heritage and how important it is to you. I am very anxious to read your essay. You can feel the passion held within this topic for you in your v.diagram. Primary resource for the subject at hand, very intriguing. Due to the plethora of experience you hold involving ceremonies it should be easy to capture the audience through "showing". Precise execution of diagram, good job!
ReplyDeleteI enjoy how excited you are about your topic. I feel the enthused we are about something, the better the writing! Good luck, i'll be looking forward to reading yours!
ReplyDeleteReview my comments about your paper, but I am looking forward to seeing what you come up with in the final draft. :)
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